Networking: Part Deux
Gravity snatches the peach
the shimmering green of Spring
The clarity of vision on the beach
prodigal clouds that whistle and sing
Lurid skyscrapers and paved ways
the forced fusion of nails and steel
The fragrant warmth of the sun's rays
the rare romantic quality we yearn to feel
Pain, glee, past, present all tied together
the animated harmony of a distant forest
Spinning, crashing, colliding forever
life, love, loss, rebirth chanting the endless chorus.
the shimmering green of Spring
The clarity of vision on the beach
prodigal clouds that whistle and sing
Lurid skyscrapers and paved ways
the forced fusion of nails and steel
The fragrant warmth of the sun's rays
the rare romantic quality we yearn to feel
Pain, glee, past, present all tied together
the animated harmony of a distant forest
Spinning, crashing, colliding forever
life, love, loss, rebirth chanting the endless chorus.
posted by ... at 10:53 PM
8 Comments:
Theres something of groups and nomads in your poems that i adore. Good stuff for reals
i love the city and i like the way you use it in sharp relief against the panorama of the open country.
de.vile - Thank you for the compliments! Do drop by again.
cj - Thank you. I was trying to capture the full spectrum. Not sure if it worked.
**silvermOOn** - Thank you for the comment. I definitely don't mind critiques or criticism. I enjoy experimenting with different forms, and I think I hemmed myself in a bit with this one.
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there is something comforting in this poem. i'm always impressed by your selection of words, how beautifully they dance together in such amazing rhythm. and the photograph is perfect for this "endless chorus"
wow....:)
your words well with the promise of rebirth. what a good way to start the year.
a great 2006 to you.
lorena - Thank you for the kind words, and have a pleasant rebirth or keep on keepin on... or have a super new year!
transience - A great 2006 to you also. And to your avatar. I hope she finds what she's licking for.
This is lyrical and spiritual. Happy New Year!
Danny
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