Reassurance
Dreamscalcified
The architecture
of the absolute
suspended
Somewhere
between
the beginning
and the end
Purpose wanes
The baton of gods
choreograph
the dance
of introspection
A new meaning,
a new beginning
take shape
A fusion
of our thoughts
embedded in
harmonic intercourse
A fleeting smile
spins the axis
of understanding
and existence
anew.
posted by ... at 9:49 PM
9 Comments:
Really like the way this begins,
"Dreams
calcified
The architecture
of the absolute
suspended"
i like the word baton in poetry. i have no idea why. maybe it's one of those things you don't find a lot of in anything. except in band.
moves like liquid or smoke or jazz. it has its own rythm and i like the way it sneak previews the meaning whilst still holding back. superb.
.:a:. - Thank you!
transience - I flirted with "wand." But, yeah, you don't get "baton" everyday.
cocaine jesus - thanks for the kind words, my man.
i like jesus cocaine's description "moves like liquid" your poetry always flows so smoothly. brilliant :)
lorena: Thank you!
I love
"Dreams
calcified
The architecture
of the absolute
suspended" and
"the dance
of introspection"
"harmonic intercourse"-
Very nice work!
I'm here via English, August's blog.
(I write under SilvermOOn at this url:
http://SilkenThreads18.blog.com, but have another blog (as Green-eyed Lady) on blogspot mainly for my artwork and lighter writing.
GEL - Thanks for stopping by and for the kind words. I dropped by your site and really enjoyed your poetry. Hope you don't mind if I add your site to the roll.
I'm honored. Thx!I feel mutually at home here and added you also. T(I will be building categories into my other site or will repost the poetry from "Green-eyed lady/Good Vibrations site" that is not on Silken Threads. If you like photogrpahy, art, and other writing, it contains different material than "ST" site.
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