Beyond an Early Door
From the interminable tide
of sleep
The world outside
Holds a morning
To make your toes curl
A wind swept sweet
Like millions of pixies
Kissing your skin
As they rush past
posted by ... at 7:17 AM
Friday, May 26, 2006
From the interminable tide
of sleep
The world outside
Holds a morning
To make your toes curl
A wind swept sweet
Like millions of pixies
Kissing your skin
As they rush past
10 Comments:
wow! how did u get that pic? how did u get the sky to look like that in the backgrond - its amazing!
ur words reminde me of something i have been trying to write for a while but ot finding the words ... i woke up and went out to play, looked into the distance and saw such an amazing sight - just the way the light was falling, like a bucket full of sunligh tipped down from the sky ... and in it a hundred butterflies ... will write it out someday :)
and we can have dreamland at our doorstep every morning and what better than pixie kisses!
charming my friend, and I would hate to see that picture other than in black n white- stunning stained sky on those shoulders..
that sky kills me with allegory. it's surreal. but the impact of those words--very real. thank you.
prerona - Just toolin' around in photoshop a bit. I look forward to reading that morning. Sounds like you already have a great start.
inkblot - Dreamland every morning? You jest!
transience - Thank me? No, thank you for the comment. Agree about the sky. I almost regret putting words down to detract from it.
Very lovely picture. And the words are like adding sugar to just-the-right-temperature coffee!
mornings like tha are better than a drug fueled high.
Surreal image with beautiful verse.
An otherwordly image; an enchanting piece. Together, they give me an exhilarating sensation of flight. ^_^
Cheers.
stormy zephyr - That's a hell of a line in its own right. Thanks.
cocaine jesus - You betcha! It was.
**silvermOOn** - Thank you for the compliment. But pity poetry? Yikes! All this time I was thinking celebratory.
Danny - I like when reality transcends reality.
soulless - That's the plan. To fly...
Jon - Thank you. Your enthusiasm is contagious!
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